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Breakfast!

January 22nd, 2008

They say it's the most important meal of the day.

Breakfast!

rainy morn, groggy head
ooo! heart-shaped banana bread
big-ass pot of tea

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   Jerry says:

   January 22, 2008 at 11:14 pm

   you know, those first two lines come off more as a couplet rather than most of a haiku. Maybe:

   rainy morn, groggy head
   ooo! heart-shaped banana bread!
   add a big-ass pot of tea
   and there may be some hope for me.

   Still, there should be more haikus with the phrase “big-ass”.

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   Jesse says:

   January 23, 2008 at 5:25 pm

   Haloscan
   let’s me down
   comments are
   not to be found

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