2 thoughts on “Breakfast!”

1. you know, those first two lines come off more as a couplet rather than most of a haiku. Maybe:

   rainy morn, groggy head
   ooo! heart-shaped banana bread!
   add a big-ass pot of tea
   and there may be some hope for me.

   Still, there should be more haikus with the phrase “big-ass”.

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2. Haloscan
   let’s me down
   comments are
   not to be found

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