Comments on: AiA: White Shadow – Episode 10

By: pool table

pool table — Fri, 07 Aug 2009 17:00:37 +0000

I just stumbled upon this by accident, so I don’t know where your story may be picking up from, but I really enjoyed your writing. It was very descrptive and captivating. Keep it up!

By: Jerry

Jerry — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 11:46:58 +0000

The good news (if you’re enjoying the story) is that I have several more episodes written. The bad news is that they belong in chapter 2 or even later. I’m wrestling in my head with two different ways to end Chapter 1. The first is much more dramatic but can probably wait until there’s another Institute to blow up, while the second one really only works here, and sets up chapter 2 better. Unfortunately, there aren’t as many explosions.

Mind-sucking viruses aren’t terribly new, there was one in Snowcrash; and the anime Serial Experiment Lain might have had something like that — sometimes in that cartoon it’s hard to tell just what the heck is going on. Some of the imagery in White Shadow is inspired by Lain.

Saw a trailer for Pirates of the Great Salt Lake, and it looked pretty funny.

By: Keith

Keith — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 06:55:13 +0000

Two things you should know:

1) Fox’s The Fringe TV show had an episode last week that centered on a mind sucking computer virus that resembled White Shadow.

2) While in the Penasquitos Blockbuster this weekend, I ran across a DVD entitled Pirates of the Great Salt Lake.

I don’t know what it means, other than you are becoming a “leading indicator” of popular culture 1 year out.

By: Keith

Keith — Mon, 02 Feb 2009 20:02:02 +0000

Damn!